Kimiko Hahn (#32) builds a glosa by opening on someone else's quatrain and letting each borrowed line close a stanza in turn; she cut the traditional ten-line stanzas because the rhyme arrived too late to sound intended. Sarah Ghazal Ali (#33) says the ghazal's couplets each hinge on themselves, so a ghazal that tells one story in order has stopped being one.
Both treat the borrowed or repeated line as a hinge, not a thread.
Exercise: take four lines from a poem you love and write four short stanzas, each ending on one of them in order. Then reorder the stanzas and see which still work. If all of them do, you have written something nearer a ghazal.
By Raz Rotenberg, made with AI